Weak fantasy and rather confused storytelling, but lots of nice parts and concepts, Dragon Sword and Wind Child is the first book by Noriko Ogiwara, and its a nice debut, but the amateurness shows in its prose and narrative.
the story of Saya, reborn Water maiden, is full of gods and dragons, spirits and resurrection, immortality and the forces of light and dark. It makes for some good reading, but only some. the problem is that the prose is sooo simplistic and the narrative full of confused half explained ideas and creatures and characters.
A good example would be two lords (Akitsu and Shainado) who were described very early on, but due to being left out of the middle of the story, you had forgotten who they were when they resurfaced - noriko then did no reintro and i couldn't even tell them apart for the rest of the book - no distinctive features or habits or different speech. This happens with a lot of the characters and situations.
Annoyingly it got to the point where i was bored with the writing, then soon after, bored with the story - i lost all concern for the characters, during the convoluted postrationalising of sudden magic powers that so-and-so accidentally realised they could 'always' do. it ended up unexplained and detremental to itself, not justifying its own plus points.
overall, unsatisfying and amateurish, but with lots of invention and ideas. uninteresting prose, and too much length really take their toll on the reader.
7/10