I downloaded this book when it was free. I think Id feel a bit cheated had I actually paid for it.
Its not a bad book, but it could be so much better. It reads (to me) a bit like a first draft, or something that a 17yr old A level student would write. There are silly grammatical errors, and the choice of words is puzzling (smirking, whinging etc), I dont know if the author knows of some other meaning for these words, but they dont often fit in with the context of the sentence. There is too many duplication of phrases, to the point where it is annoying. Its like the author thought of a phrase and decided to use it to the death (young girl, chrome yellow sun). Oh, and the characters spend far too much time smiling (or smirking), every other line is "...said Dorothy with a smile", "....said Dorothy, smiling" - ARGGGGHHH!!!!
Ive not finished it yet, but with another re-write (after a good going through with a red pen), this book could be great.