Author, I am not. Nor was I in Vietnam, although I've read 200+ books about Vietnam.
This book is in my top 10. However, an avid reader I am. I know good from bad.
Author, I hope you're reading this.
At 2/3 through the book, you lost it on editing, and made ridiculous spelling and grammar mistakes on a work of art. I'm not trying to be harsh, but they really pull the reader out of the story.
I am a veteran too, although not Vietnam, and salute you for all that. I'm just jotting this down as a reader who loved the book.
This is a fantastic, vivid, gut-wrenching work.
But please, Author. The worst thing you can do is jolt a reader out of the story with spelling and grammar mistakes. I spotted ten simple spelling and grammatical mistakes in the last third of the book, things like, "I road the Freedom Bird with him" when you meant "I rode the Freedom Bird". It's like - you had a deadline. Which I really understand, but come back and fix it for posterity's sake.
This is a fantastic, beautifully rendered, well-crafted, graphically detailed novel. You have it all, and you screw it up with some simple spelling and missed words in the last 2/3? Fix it, already. I'll give you 6/5 rating.
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