What a horrible disappointment! I *thoroughly* enjoyed the first third of the book, with all its interesting plots and unrelated storylines that you knew would sooner or later weave together to make an intricate Zelazny tapestry. The Virtù & Verité idea is fabulous! The writing was swift and subtle and every bit the Zelazny I have recently come to know and appreciate. However, right around that bit about the Brass Baboon (perhaps written in a foggy haze near the end of his life? Fitting, since it depicts his hero fighting Death, even if only to a "draw") things start to fall apart. A few pages later it becomes O-B-V-I-O-U-S that Ms Lindskold has taken up the fallen pen to veer off in her own direction. Didn't Zelazny leave any notes on how the story was going to wind up? Couldn't they find somebody with a less.....how shall I put it?...."feminine" style to finish up a masterpiece from this impeccably masculine author? All that dialog. All that explanation of how people were feeling and dreaming and interacting..... Uck. She immediately kills off the most interesting characters (well, they're mostly dead anyhow), introduces still more unrelated characters (she's even got the old girl-dressed-as-a-man gag... puh-leeeze!) and tries to "talk like the boys" as she bludgeons us with lurid desciptions of Sayjack's depravities. These descriptions are the most telling of all: the first time she wanders into this subplot she's a bit timid; then she's foul-mouthed and disgustingly descriptive; then the language turns into a sort of XXX-rated romance novel. *Shudder* After breezing happily through this fantastic Zelazny universe for a couple of hundred pages I am now schlogging through a muddy, trackless swamp, and I fear I won't even be able to finish the bloody thing. I no longer care how things will turn out. I am no longer interested in the suddenly shallow Virtù characters, and I never have developed any interest in "Jay". I suppose it would be fair to say the Ms Lindskold did a better job than I would have with the difficult task of finishing another man's thought, but that isn't saying much. If you liked "Children of the Jedi" you'll probably like this book. Otherwise, buy it, read the first third and then just put it down. You'll be happier that way, believe me!