The premise and some details are a bit silly - pretend pirates, a timespace barrier of scrambled egg, the enemy leader being the only one with authority, but the story and its twists are intriguing, especially the deaths. There are very few locations too, all finely described, which is an advantage to following the action and incidents.
Written partly in two time streams, which can be briefly confusing and a bit irritating, it all comes together for a happy ending, though I still don't know how the engineers drink the milkshakes.