I thoroughly enjoyed Andrew Grant's first David Trevellyan novel, "Even," and had been eagerly anticipating this second one however, I have to say that I felt it was somewhat of a letdown after such a strong beginning.
The character of Trevellyan is an extremely good creation; efficient, lethal, confident, pragmatic with a keen sense of humour and a nice line in sarcasm and witty put-downs, his sleek narration of the novel keeps the pace up and makes the reader cheer him on, especially when he's confronted by what appears to be overwhelming odds but which we, as the reader, know he is more than capable of handling.
"Even," had all of that as well as a plot that was exciting, well thought out and kept the reader guessing, but it's plot that is the major fault here. It feels like an afterthought (as well as being a tad, "by the numbers") and seems to have been created just as a means to get the reader, and the hero, to what the author thinks is an earth-shattering, "twist." The only problem with that is that this, "twist," is so blatantly obvious from page one that they might as well have revealed it in the blurb on the back.
Such obviousness robs it's big reveal of any dramatic punch that it might have had (as does the fact that, after all that build up, it's dealt with rather perfunctorily and extremely swiftly) and simply makes you wonder why a man as brilliant as Trevallyan didn't see it coming from a mile off like we did. As a result, many moments in the book feel like they should be much longer, instead of whizzing by as they do in order to get us to that all important, "twist," and whole sequences that we, as readers, expect to see unfurl before us, are more often than not mere build-up, with the actual events happening, "off the page," and explained to us later by other characters. It's almost as if Grant is writing to a page count that he cannot go over as opposed to an actual satisfying conclusion.
That said, it is still a decent enough read, just a little disappointing after such a great start. The character of Trevallyan deserves better as he definitely has the potential to be one of the better ones in this kind of fiction and I hope Mr. Grant can find a plot that does the character justice for his next novel in the series.