This book has been a long time in the writing. However, reading it, I wonder why. Perhaps the least of its faults is that it has been inadequately proof-read. The number of typos are legion, in some cases several on every page. Sam Evans, for example, becomes Sam Ellis on a number of pages, Northwich Norwich, and so on, to the extent that these interfere with the flow of the narrative.
But this is a minor problem compared to the fact that Hattersley has clearly failed to do some basic research. His account of the 1894-6 Cymru Fydd conroversy, for example, collapses into nonsense when he describes Lloyd George's plans to secure the abolition of the South Wales Liberal Federation as follows:
'The Obstructive South Wales Liberal Federation would be superseded and engulfed by the Rhondda Liberal Association...'
This in all seriousness!! The Rhondda Liberal Association was a constituency association, which belonged to the South Wales Liberal Federation, not a similar, more nationalist body. How Hattersley has developed this idea is frankly beyond me, unless he hasn't thought to check any one of dozens of books on this subject. This speaks of sloppy writing, as well as sloppy thinking.
Equally, the identification of Mabon, MP for the Rhondda, as 'Anti-Nationalist' is to assume that only Lloyd George's version of nationalism was the correct one. Given that Lord Hattersley has been advised by Kenneth Morgan and John Graham Jones, one would expect better. Even if he had not been, there is the assumption that a writer would acquire a proper knowledge of his subject before putting pen to paper. The same may be said of his identification of the three candidates at the 1922 Newport by-election as a Labour man, a Coalition Conservative and an anti-Coalition Conservative. In fact, they were a Liberal, a Conservative, and a Labour man.
Hattersley is able to tell the story in a relatively concise manner, but with little understanding, especially of Lloyd George's roots. Given his former close association with Neil Kinnock, this is surprising. Hattersley is a sympathetic, although not idolatrous biographer, seeing Lloyd George as a worthy radical, but a man who put ambition above all things
The episodic nature of the book seems in part due to a heavy reliance on the works of other people. For example, a passage on pages 65-6 shows a heavy reliance on Bentley Gilbert's 'Architect of Change', page 97. Perhaps this is a reason for some of the odd interpretations which occasionally appear.
On the whole, this book is a pale shadow of the book which could have been written, consisting of sloppy research, and largely relying on information which has been in the public domain for decades. I would not direct readers to this largely derivative work, but suggest instead the works of John Grigg, Bentley B. Gilbert, Peter Rowland or Kenneth O. Morgan for anyone wishing to understand this remarkable politician. Even as a popular biography, this is a painful flop. The English translation of D. R. Daniel's memoir of Lloyd George which Prys Morgan produced for Hattersley, however, would be a valuable addition to the resources available to those interested in Lloyd George.