I wrote this review to provide my opinion of After the Dark, and challenge what I view as disappointing inconsistencies and sloppy plotlines by the author. I have watched the two seasons of the show several times and read all of the sequel books, which (especially this, the final instalment) I found disappointingly representative of the established Dark Angel universe.
Spoilers, etc. follow.
Firstly, Syrius made many good points in her/his earlier review; I recommend you read it.
Collins wrote in uncharacteristic violence. Despite having been bred as a weapon, Max never showed a fondness for killing, only doing so for survival. To make matters worse, every attacker was despatched in the same way: a broken neck; this rapidly grew tiresome. Furthermore, I see no reason for the unnecessarily brutal way in which Collins expressed Joshua's (justifiable) rage towards White.
I know that print allows more freedom than prime-time television, but brutal violence was never a part of the show and I don't feel that Collins should have taken it upon himself to make it a part of the book(s). The same applies to the swearing used throughout. The phrase "If it ain't broke, don't fix it" comes to mind.
I also reiterate earlier reviewers' points about the attention to detail that Collins showed to other issues. One example is Logan's exoskeleton. Probably the most notable is the protaganists' attitude toward Lydecker, given that before his disappearance in the show, he was almost an ally to them. Worst, though, was how he just appears near the end, providing a sloppy opening for anyone who may decide to continue the franchise. His role in the story is cringeworthy and laughable.
If White was shown to be willing to use torture in Skin Game, why did he leave Logan virtually unharmed in this book? Who else would be likelier to know where Ray was? I couldn't take the chapters that followed seriously, as Max and co. searched for White's son while he had the man responsible for the disappearance in his grasp. Perhaps I have missed something, but it seems to me that Collins can't even retain consistency between or even within his own books, much less with the show.
As with its predecessor, the book's ending comes across as having been rushed. The story suddenly accelerates drastically, clumsily tying up loose ends and linking various plotlines. The Coming is dismissed as a delusion; the reader is expected to believe that, despite their proven force and scope, the Conclave/Familiars will simply disappear and leave everyone alone.
I was initially somewhat encouraged by After the Dark, feeling that it was more faithful to the series than Skin Game. However, the quality of Collins' interpretation fell as the book progressed and disappointment replaced my cautious optimism.
Collins' books represent a poor attempt at continuing/closing the series, which in my opinion leaves much to be desired.