This was the first Gor book I read, because I heard it had belly dancing in it. After forcing myself to finish it, I can honestly say it is the most poorly written book I have ever read. John Norman has the most annoying writing style I have ever seen. He somehow manages to fill an entire book with words that don't seem to say anything. He likes to drag out his sentences by adding extra words that don't need to be there such as "to, therefor, also..." and he seems to think that run on sentences will make him sound smarter.
Poor writing aside, his characters have as much depth as a sheet tray. The main character is supposed to be smart, but I don't recall one smart thing she did in the entire book. Apparently we are supposed to believe she is smart because people are always telling her she is. Mind you, the people telling her this are men who are her Masters and consider a "smart" woman to be one who obeys them at all times. The other characters are no better. The men are all sexist, controlling pigs who only care about war, drinking and reminding slave girls they are slaves (see dialogue example below). We are told that these Gorean men are somehow better than our Earth men, but I didn't see one example of a man who was in the least bit admirable either for his charm, intelligence, or any other characteristic aside from his ability to boss around naked women.
Which brings me to another point. Yes, this book is about women being slaves to men. I get that. It's not the pinnacle of feminist ideals. I could appreciate if it was the fantasy, sexy fun I figured it would be. Instead it's filled with pages full of Norman's own insistence that "modern women" are somehow denying their true femininity by not enslaving themselves to men. Norman *constantly* bashes feminism. If I had a nickel for every time a slave said or thought something about how they love to be a slave, how they were meant to be a slave, how they were now fully "aware" of their femaleness, how badly Earth women are
missing out, etc. I would be rich. Instead of feeling like I am taken to another world where things are different, I feel like I am reading a book that is the authors soap box for his anti-feminist views and his sexual fantasy land (despite the fact he conveniently skips describing the sex scenes and spends all his time detailing how the women are chained instead). Not to mention the fact this idea is incredibly flawed. The main character is chosen to be a slave because the person who went to Earth and picked her out tested her by telling her to do things and seeing if she would comply, even though she didn't know this man or have any reason to do what he said. How many women would really do this? She was basically culled from the flock! But we are told that, deep down inside, all women are like this. It's so far off the mark it's completely unbelievable. I find myself wishing Norman had instead chosen to make her fully resist being a slave and showed her growth as a character despite this drastic change in her life. But no, she's pretty much a slave before she's ever selected. There is no growth, no struggle. She takes to her slavery like a fish in water. What is this book about again?
The dialogue is atrocious. It's full of pointless conversations such as:
Master: You are chained
Slave: Yes, Master
Master: You enjoy being chained
Slave: Yes, Master. I am a slave!
Master: You enjoy being a slave
Slave: Yes, Master!
Followed by the slave begging for sex, although what she's all hot and bothered about remains to be seen.
The plot is weak, weak, weak. At one point Norman actually switches a main character out for another and doesn't seem to notice his error. Where is the editor of this book?? He also likes to constantly not tell you what is going on or what happened between the last chapter you finished and the next chapter you just started. He seems to think this is suspenseful when in fact it's just plain annoying.
To give you an idea of what you would be reading, here is my own impersonation of John Norman's writing "style" which I have been told men many "Goreans" is a sad, yet accurate impersonation:
"Or instead of self mutilation I could just read another John Norman book. Too, therefore, also I might read something, on occasion, which might sometimes go like this, whoever the reader, when reading a John Norman book, as well. I might also, when reading a John Norman book, find, that also, I might shoot myself in the head, sometimes to avoid further reading which might, in time, drive me insane from frustration which, is brought about by the reading of John Norman, and I would be well shot in the head, if done by a true Gorean Master, who are well versed in such things as the shooting of women, and would not miss. How lucky I would be to have such a master! Truly, I would be shot well, for I would be only a slave, and how grateful I would be, for I would be shot well."