Before I start my review of this book, I would like to suggest that anyone who is interested in buying a book on copywriting should buy Andy Maslen's excellent
Write To Sell: The Ultimate Guide to Great Copywriting. Read that book first before reading any other book on the topic. It's arguably one of the best books on copywriting available.
Now to *Copywriting by Mark Shaw. I've awarded this book two stars for effort - it seems to have been a labour of love for Shaw and there is no doubting that he has put a lot of time and effort into his book. However, the book is completely let down by its bizarre (almost insane) layout and the tedious writing style. I'm not sure whether Shaw is at fault for this, or his publishers - I suspect a combination of both. The book covers writing for:
-advertising and direct marketing
-retailing and products
-catalogues
-company magazines/newsletters
-websites
-marketing and internal communications
Taking the layout first, the book is, quite frankly, a mess. The font is sans serif and very small, rendering it incredibly difficult to read - my eyes started to hurt just looking at some of the pages. The main text is interspersed with small quotes (in the margins and in italics) from copywriting luminaries. Dotted throughout the book are boxouts and chapter summaries, which are printed on luminous yellow pages. That there are so many of these gives the book a "Yellow Pages" feel. The case studies are presented on dull beige/grey pages, but the part-italics/part-sans serif font make reading difficult (again). Be warned, this is a very text-heavy book and it's not easy to use a reference - something you can dip in and out of. The use of imagery and examples of adverts, billboards, websites is welcomed, but let down by the awful reproductions. The paper quality isn't good and so the images haven't come out well at all.
Content-wise, at every opportunity, Shaw seems to have used four or five words when one would have done. There is no flow to the text - it's not written as an academic text, but it is completely devoid of any life. Long paragraphs of rambling text go nowhere, and at times treat the reader like an idiot (for example, "retailing is about making profits, in this case by selling products to customers who visit your premises or website"). If Shaw isn't going into minutiae details, he's straying from the topic of copywriting and covering areas such as retailing and creating product brands. He's trying to cover too much and ends up over-complicating the subject.
Overall, I found this a poor book. If you want something short and sharp on copywriting that you can keep on your desk as a reference book and read in one short sitting, then look no further than an Andy Maslen book. *Copywriting by Mark Shaw makes grim reading in comparison.