I found this book a nightmare to read. I'm on page 188 of 406 and am detemined to finish it because I don't like to leave a book unfinished, but this is what I have found.
1) The author supposes much of the story. I found it hard to understand how he supposed how Chanels great-grandfather, and every relative including Chanel herself could have lived and thought. I then read the inside of the front cover where it says ' this book is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, organisations, places and events are either the product of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events or locales is entirely coincidental'. Why proffer it as a bio of Chanel then? Why use photos of her? Why say it is the inspiration for the movie 'Coco avant Chanel'?
2) The text is very difficult to follow. The author rambles. He uses sentences that are too long mixed in with sentences that are too short.
3) He uses this - ... - constantly. It makes you feel that he couldn't find the right way to put the sentence together or that something is missing.
4) He uses inverted commas - approx. 3 per page - unnecessarily and out of context. It becomes really irritating.
5) He inserts sentences of the present tense into the general past tense of the story. He combines overly pompous descriptions with slang eg. wierdos.
6) He uses rhetorical questions to suggest what he doesn't know. For example, on page 9 - 'He spent eight months at Travers de Castillion, a little village at the foot of the Cevennes, neither forest nor mountain, nor yet plains or town. Jobs were scarce. People said that in Ales...That was true, Ales, mines, coal, jobs...But he hesitated. It meant going even farther away. Weren't they already saying he ''came from afar''? What would it be like elsewhere? He hunted, groped. Something in him still resisted the allure of the town, the dreams of high life.' This was of Chanels grandfather.
All in all, I'm not sure if it the author, the translator or the publishers who are to blame. But for sure, all fell down on what should have been a great book.