"The Castles of Athlin and Dunbayne" was Ann Radcliffe's first novel and has long been out of print. It is set in the Middle Ages and follows the intertwining paths of two noble families in constant battle with each other. This early work certainly set the stage for Radcliffe's later work - especially her Gothic masterpiece, "The Romance of the Forest."
Set in the highlands of Scotland, the novel begins with a battle between the chieftains of the two warring families. On one side of the fray is Alleyn, a poor young man who falls hopelessly in love with Mary, the daughter of the Athlin family, knowing that they could never be together because of his lowborn position. On the other side is the evil Baron of Dunbayne, whose family is responsible for the murder of the Lord of Athlin (the main cause of the dispute between the families). Soldiers from Dunbayne capture in turn both Mary and her brother Osbert, and each must fight to save their lives as well as those of the ones they have fallen in love with. Of course, with a Gothic novel, nothing could be straightforward and Radcliffe filled her novel with numerous schemes, several kidnappings, near death experiences, nefarious plots and a long-lost heir returned to glory - a tall order to fill in 113 pages.
"The Castles of Athlin and Dunbayne", while a short and rather fast-paced read, is also rather confusing. Radcliffe switched from character to character with little distinction between their actions or thoughts. The initial problems between the families can be difficult to sort out since she used names instead of titles. One fight follows another with no time to recover from the last. The story follows a rather predictable outcome, but is filled with the typical Gothic archetypes that roots Radcliffe's romance. Surely this publishing of her early work is a treasure for literature lovers, but it is far from Radcliffe's best work. Still, it is interesting to see how her work progressed from this early attempt to her later novels.