The Capture of the Earl of Glencrae (Cynster) [Mass Market Paperback]

 

 

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The mysterious Laird of the two previous books has fallen down a crevasse and is apparently dead. Anyone that has ever read any fiction previously knows this means that his survival is virtually guaranteed, especially since he is tall and handsome, and not as bad as the author has half-heartedly painted him. He returns to London to have his wicked way with the last sister Angelica, (not aptly named) who is trawling balls and parties looking for "the one".She throws herself at him, he duly abducts her and the rest of the books is spent sorting out all the loose ends.

The book has S.L.'s usual pace and verve, and completes the trilogy satisfactorily, but the heroine's behaviour seems almost pathologically wreckless and the Laird will never know a moment's peace again. The author seems to be running low on ideas.

Please can the publishers produce better covers? The same model has been used each time in this series and in the Bastion Club series all the headless heroines seem only to have about two dresses between them and their beaux sport one dodgy coat that has been made over with a bit of braid and fringe. Amateur Dramatic Societies could do better!

This book is the conclusion of the latest trilogy in the "Bar Cynster" series, a story in three volumes set in 1829 which features three sisters, Heather, Eliza and Angelica Cynster. It is essential to read these three books in the correct sequence, which is

1) "Viscount Breckenridge To The Rescue" (Heather)
2) "In Pursuit Of Eliza Cynster," and
3) This book, "The capture of the Earl of Glencrae" (Angelica)

Spoiler alert - it is challenging to describe these books without including "spoilers" which give away too much plot detail. I think I have avoided any significant spoilers for "The capture of the Earl of Glencrae" in this review, but it is exceptionally difficult to say anything substantial about the plot of this final book in the trilogy without at least hinting at a couple of major spoilers for the second book. So if you have not yet read the first two novels in this trilogy I would advise you to stop reading here and follow the links above to the first two books instead.

Heather, Eliza, and Angelica Cynster, the heroines of the three books of this trilogy are the daughters of Lord Martin and Lady Celia Cynster, who are the uncle and aunt of "That Devil Cynster," (Sylvester, 6th Duke of St Ives and hero of "Devil's Bride (Bar Cynster)). Our heroines are therefore the younger sisters of Rupert Cynster (a.k.a. Gabriel, from A Secret Love (Bar Cynster)) and Alasdair (a.k.a. Lucifer, from All About Love (Bar Cynster)).

The trilogy began at an unidentified castle in the highlands of Scotland, where a mortal enemy of the Cynster family plots revenge against that family. She blames them for something which began a generation before and which she has allowed to totally warp her life. This being the final book in the trilogy we finally discover in this volume who the lady is, what is the supposed injury which causes her to hate the Cynsters, and just how sick in the head she is. And believe me, the villainess of this trilogy is pretty sick, with the result that one scene in this book really pushes the envelope for the genre.

She has found a way to blackmail her son, an honorable man who has no wish to harm the Cynsters, into taking part in her schemes by threatening to beggar not just him but every member of his clan, people he is responsible for. She has stolen from his safe a valuable item without which he and all his people will lose their land and homes, and as the price for its' return she demands that her son kidnaps one of the daughters of Lord Martin and Lady Celia Cynster, and brings her to Scotland, destroying the girl's reputation in the process, so that she can have her revenge.

Her son, who in the first two books was known to the reader and to the Cynster famiy simply as "The Laird," has been trying to find a way to get his mother to hand back the item without actually harming one of the Cynster girls. In the first two books he employed kidnappers, under very strict instructions that the young ladies were not to be hurt in any way, to snatch first Heather and then Eliza Cynster. But both girls escaped with the help of the heroes of their respective books and found in the process that those gentlemen were indeed their personal "heroes" e.g. the men they want to spend their lives with.

At the start of the second book, after Heather's kidnapping, Eliza and Angelica were under close guard: particularly against any Scottish noblemen. Scrope, the villain who "the laird" employed, had to pull off a daring and brilliant trick to snatch Eliza.

But towards the end of that book both Eliza and her hero, Jeremy Carling, saw "the Laird" fall off a cliff. They are convinced that he could not possibly have survived that fall.

So at the start of this third book in the trilogy, because the Cynsters know that "the Laird" is dead, they are allowing the third sister, 21 year old Angelica, to attend balls and functions without being guarded within an inch of her life. Angelica has always believed that she will know her future husband the moment she sets eyes on him. At a soiree hosted by Lady Cavendish, she sees a very handsome man with a proud and distinguished air, and is instantly convinced that he is the man she wants. She inquires after his identity and a mutual friend tells her that he is Dominic, Viscount Debenham, and speaks highly of him.

An English Viscount whose identity and integrity are rapidly confirmed, and who is very much alive, cannot possibly have any connection to a dead Scottish laird, so Angelica brazenly arranges to have herself introduced to Viscount Debenham. Which turns out to be the start of a remarkable adventure ...

If like many readers you have difficulty suspending disbelief for the sake of enjoying a book when something unlikely or out of character for the period happens, you should probably leave this entire trilogy alone. Certainly I had huge difficulty believing that any real-life woman would make some of the decisions which Angelica makes during this book. I had similar difficulty believing that her family would be able to forgive some of the things they do forgive.

The historical House of Lords only had a couple of hundred members in 1829. Consequently I found it unlikely that an active member of that house, e.g. Devil Cynster, would not already have known or very rapidly have been able to discover certain absolutely basic information about a fellow-member of the House of Lords of which the Cynster family remain unaware for days in this book, even when actively searching for information about the individual concerned. Or that it would have been left for an elderly aunt to suggest after days of fruitless investigation that they look him up in a newfangled book called Burke's Peerage.

Well-brought up young ladies of the ton, as high society was called in the early nineteenth century, did not generally behave the way the heroines of this series and most of Stephanie Laurens' other recent books do. In particular they rarely abandoned their virginity before marriage as readily as these heroines do, not least because an unmarried young lady who enthusiastically jumped into the hero's bed would have no reliable means of avoiding pregnancy.

Finally, like her sister in the previous volume, Angelica disguises herself as a young man at one point in the story. Which presents the author with an instant dilemma: the choice between making the disguise effective or providing an opportunity to draw the attention of the hero, because you can't have both.

If you are trying to disguise an attractive woman as a young man, and want the disguise to actually fool anyone, you have to go for relatively loose garments, particularly around the bust, hips, and thighs. An attractive woman has curves at the hips which we men are biologically programmed to notice, and in tight trousers those curves will draw the attention of any man with normal eyesight.

The problem for a romance writer if the heroine is disguised as a man, is that the author usually wants the hero to notice those curves but for the the disguise to work on everyone else. In the previous book the author managed a reasonable compromise by having the hero notice Eliza Cynster's "subtle curves" largely concealed under the skirts of her jacket. But in this volume the impact of her sister Angelica in male attire on the hero of the book is about as subtle as a sledgehammer - he thinks she looks like, quote "An angel from one of his more salacious dreams."

If her shape wearing these clothes has that effect on the hero, the disguise isn't going to fool many other people, is it?

But having said all that I liked the main characters in this book, the ongoing romantic tension building between them, and the fact that a lot of the story is told with a great deal of dry wit and humour which was more than a little amusing.

Overall: so many aspects of this book are ridiculously implausible that it should have been a complete turkey, but somehow it wasn't and I actually found myself enjoying the book rather a lot. If you like the other recent Stephanie Laurens novels, you will probably enjoy this.

The Bar Cynster books are usually described as Regency novels and they did begin at that period, but strictly speaking this is a Georgian romance rather than a Regency one, as it is set in the last year when "Prinny" was King in his own right as George IV. This book is numbered 18 in the table and family tree which appear at the front of the book, but if you count the prequel, (The Promise in a Kiss (Bar Cynster)) and the "Barnaby Adair" adventure "Temptation and Surrender" this is actually the twentieth Cynster novel.

The Cynster series to date consists of

1) Devil's Bride (Bar Cynster) (Devil and Honoria)
2) A Rake's Vow: Cynster Family Series, Book 2 (Cynster Novels) (Vane and Patience)
3) Scandal's Bride (Richard/Scandal and Catriona)
4) A Rogue's proposal (Harry/Demon and Felicity)
5) A Secret Love (Rupert/Gabriel and Alathea)
6) All about Love (Alistair/Lucifer and Phyllida)
7) All About Passion (Bar Cynster) (Lord Chillingworth gets Rachel for Leah)
8) On a wild night (Amanda Cynster and Martin)
9) On a wicked dawn (Amelia Cynster and Luc)
10)... Read more ›

I found this book equally enjoyable to 'In Pursuit of Eliza Cynster', yet very different. What I like about these romances is that so much time is taken over the hero and heroines relationship. The action never takes centre stage to the couple getting to know each other - which basically is what I'm in for. I also especially enjoyed the Scottish setting in this one. There might be a little too much explanation and speculation, which sometimes get boring. As someone else said, Laurens should 'show' rather than 'tell' more.
Oh, and sorry for being crude, but has anyone else wondered why these girls don't get pregnant?! I know it's not realism, but still!

Anyway, overall, a satisfying and sexy romance!

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4.0 out of 5 stars A Satisfying Ending to the Trilogy
I'd rate this as the best book out of the recent trilogy, and a return to form after the disappointment of In Pusuit of Eliza Cyster. Read more

Published 10 days ago by Comedy Fan

5.0 out of 5 stars Lovely
I love Stephanie Laurens!

Yet again has she produced a story that makes you smile, laugh and roll your eyes in frustration. Read more

Published 13 days ago by Sophie Klasan

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