on 24 June 2012
In a small town in Kansas, cattle are getting attacked. Some are torn apart, while others get away with a little blood loss and some strange sort of virus. The target of the contagion isn't bovine, after all: it's human. Keith Harris, an angry man with a weak sense of self control, is the first to come across the vampires, and his actions set off a twisted chain of events that delves into the darkness lurking within us all.
For a novella of its limited length, Burden Kansas does a superb job setting up its characters and fleshing out pasts through passing comments and very brief explanations. The mix of man and monster in Keith's psyche is superbly done, and one is as horrified as one is sympathetic with the choices he has made over the course of his life. Dennis's fear and impotent sense of rage feels genuine, and it is this understanding of everyone's motivations that make the events in this supernatural story wholly believable.
The story itself is told in short, choppy prose, which the author has described as "the minimal voice of the western." It is indeed minimalist, which sets and edgier tone to the tale and blends well with Keith's voice and perspective. It does lend itself to some redundancies, and I would have appreciated more diversity of word choice, but as a whole, the style works quite well.
One of the main advantages of this story, I believe, is that the content was suited to its length. The story moved along steadily, and the final denouement, while somewhat open-ended, felt conclusive enough. The book makes for a quick, interesting read, though it may be a little too dark for an afternoon at the beach.
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on 11 June 2012
I especially liked the Kansas setting (Go Redskins!) There was good attention to format, editing and presentation for the Kindle.
There are some nice slants on the characters making it more than your average grr argg vampire story. There was a feeling that some sub-plots had been set up but not explored. Keeping it at Novella length and sticking with a good sharp read worked well in this instance.
My only regret? There should have been a blood fest in Lenexa :) Regards, CW.