It's OK, barely. To be honest, I gave this comic a shot solely because of the art work. The artwork is also the only reason why I continued to flip the pages. It's really very very good. But I'm surprised I'm the first one giving it an "OK" or worse.
But the dialogue needs some big improvement. Good dialogue is like a delicious sammich. As it comes out of the fictitious mouths of the characters your reading, it should give you the warm and fuzzy like a delicious sammich going into your mouth. When reading this issue, I felt like a stale hot dog was being shoved down my throat, and it was somehow poking my brain.
But if you enjoy lines such as:
"You are a waste my time maggots! Your smell tells me I have a rapist and child molestor!" (A big dude is holding a couple of guys he calls meat sacks, yes, they left out the word "of")
"AARGH! The river of fire is too hot!" (As the same big dude stands over a stream of lava)
"hmmm... Time to figure out what this b**ch is made of!" (After the same big guy spent the last couple pages running away from said fancy lady)
It doesn't get any better from there. If there wasn't any lame misplaced cursing, it would make for dialogue good for kids 9 and up. To be honest, that's what this comic book feels like, a book for kids. If a dudes leg is cut off, there's no blood or anything like that. It's like the limb was made of clay; the meat is the same color as the skin.
I've reviewed a fair share of comics on Amazon. Most of them are 4 stars and up. This is the first time I've felt the need to give one a 3. It has potential. It really does. But as a first issue, it feels floppy.