I purchased this book a while ago, thanks to a strong (though not unequivocally glowing) review by Times children's book critic Amanda Craig. During redecorating, the book got pushed behind some others, and I'd forgotten all about it until I saw it had won the Costa Book Awards Children's Fiction category. Inspired, to read it, I dug it out, and here I am.
On completion, my first thought was that it must have been a lean year for children's books. That's not to say 'Blood Red Road' is a bad book. It's an exciting read, but for me one with lots of flaws, and I'm surprised it won the judges favour (but hey - what do I know?). One of the biggest problems for me, is the novel's similarity to Patrick Ness' terrific
Chaos Walking trilogy. 'The Knife of Never Letting Go' (the first book in the series), won the similar Costa approval, but for me 'BRR' is but a pale imitation. Both novels offer a dystopian view of the future and both take place in a frontier land reminiscent of the Wild West. Both use phonetic dialogue, and feature a despairing quest across a foreboding landscape. Both novels have a megalomaniac villain pulling the strings; sadly, in only one of the novels is this villain believable and it isn't 'BRR'.
The story is a simple one. Sometime in the far future in a broken world, Saba, Lugh and Emmi live with their father, by the side of a shrinking lake. Nobody else lives nearby. One day some soldiers arrive, kill the father and kidnap Lugh, leaving Saba and Emmi on their own. Saba vows to bring her brother back, and so begins the quest to find him. Saba is drawn from the Kantiss (of
The Hunger Games) mould - tough, resilient, resourceful and a woman who refuses to know when she is beaten. Fans of the 'HG' will find much to like here, particularly in the early stages when Saba finds herself conscripted as a cage fighter.
There are some good things about this book. It is very readable, particularly in the middle third. The author uses her phonetic dialogue well. The manner in which each character talks, tells the reader something extra about them. I often find this type of writing difficult to get into, but I had no problems here. Young's cracked world is a well-drawn and interesting setting. She hints at where and when it might be, tantalising the reader, but never revealing enough to destroy the mystery. The shifting sands, uncovering and re-covering artefacts from a distant era, is a particularly effective device. There is also a crow who steals all the best lines.
The problems with the novel come from the heavy-handed way in which plot is driven forward. (The following paragraphs contain some spoilers, so you may not want to read them)
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Despite them both being prisoners Saba's sister can pretty much come and go at will. This allows Saba to send the messages she needs to orchestrate her plan. It's convenient but not convincing. Saba is brilliant at cage fighting. This is explained by a red mist that comes over her. It is just about works, but throughout the book, she remains an awesome fighter, and a crack shot, without any formal training. Then, for no apparent reason, somebody who has vital information for Saba, and a unique link to her, conveniently turns up in an adjoining prison cell. This prisoner reveals a few cryptic hints before being plucked away, before she can reveal too much and spoil the whole book...
The route taken by Saba's guide, to find her brother, isn't the fastest possible. The detour is just to pick up a couple of characters who add little to the story (apart from a contrived emotive bit at the end). This makes the whole quest a race against time. It adds tension but is contrived. This route takes the characters across what might as well be called 'The Plateau of Certain Death'. (Where the guide has already been, but seems happy to go back? Oh yes, and he doesn't tell anybody else about it, until it's too late for them to turn back). Then whilst on the 'PofCD', just as they are all about to be killed, something even scarier comes along, and frightens off the original attackers. Saba then kills this new beast and the day is saved.
Because Saba hasn't taken the quickest route, there is a chance that some earlier acquaintances might turn up. Would the cavalry turn up? It was all so contrived, and the baddie such a caricature, it was hard to care. A baddie, it should be pointed out, who Saba has two opportunities to kill and fails to do so. Okay, she didn't check properly first time, that's a believable mistake, but second time - a bolt to the head straight away was her only plausible course of action.
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I worry that the Costa prize recognition has made me take a look at this book a little deeper than I might have done otherwise, and I'm disappointed that it didn't stand up to close scrutiny. This is undoubtedly a page turner but I don't think it's destined to be a classic of post-apocalypse fiction. If it's that you're after, try the Patrick Ness books or even the recently published
Pure. Both of these are far subtler examinations of power and loss.