I examined this book poem by poem and found a huge range of quality on offer, from the very good to the fairly mediocre. It seems that some of the longer poems and pieces of prose lose direction or lack substance, but those that are shorter can be highly effective, mostly in the way the several ideas and metaphors that the poet uses flow together and connect. However, the overall standard just falls short of five stars, but the four-star rating is impressive for someone of Laala's age and should not be considered an insult.