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Unfortunately it got worse
on 30 March 2014
I read book one, and quite enjoyed the first half. By the time I got to the second half I wondered if it had been written by two different people, then I realised that after the first half it was the editing that had stopped. That was a great shame.
Book two started quite well, but why did it have to keep having recaps. It made it seem that this was originally a series and you were trying to keep new readers up to date with what had happened before - annoying when it comes in Chapter 23!!! If you haven't got enough to fill the pages, make it a shorter book.
Oh yes just remember FLU is a virus and FLUE is what you put up a chimney. Somebody ACCEPTS a drink not EXCEPTS (which is excluding).
Please, get decent proof readers and an editor.