An average story in my opinion, the characters are reasonably well fleshed out, but lack depth, I can't say I found myself caring one way or the other if they survive. There are a few holes in the plot and one or two events that are just too convenient. I finished the story but purely because I paid for it, I will not be purchasing the next chapter.
All that said, for the price (£1.99) I was not too disappointed, it killed a few hours and the writer can work well with words, you can "see" the world he is drawing you into, but it's not quite there yet. I have read worse at a higher price.