I was very excited to read this book, after reading the reviews of the author. The book started out strong, with great writing which made it all the more disapointing midbook when the whole thing gradually fell apart, losing momentum, believability, and interest along the way.
It was almost as if the book was written by two different people, and the one that took over in the second half needs to go back to writing school. The characters are not at all developed, their motivations are very unclear and never explained. Plot devices are introduced, for example the double of the author, and then the device is not explored or explained. In several places the narrator foreshadows an event that when it actually happens sinks like a lead ballon.
As an example, the narrator has an attack of fever, (was he set up? was he poisoned?) during which the other characters seem to be menancing him, or something, which is never explained and is not followed through on after he recovers. Actually at this point, the whole book seemed to fall apart. Why does one character want him to deliver her baby? How is he an offering? Why does Alex decide to leave? Why does he decide to stay? Why was Alex even interested in him anyway? Oh, and this was the most non-erotic erotic novel I have ever read.
I can't recommend this book, even though the first 50 pages or so are well written.