This really could have been a reasonable story, if only an adult had written it!
This book must have been written by an adolescent (in my opinion). It is not just badly punctuated, it is so badly written that a great deal of it makes no sense even when you remove the superfluous commas and full stops.
The constant descriptions of bite sizes are boring, as is the lack of continuity. For instance, there is one scene where 'Lance' is watching the news on tv, together with 'Leah', his girlfriend, and having taken in the hideous news, he calls 'Leah' over to see it for herself! Why? She was apparently standing there with him already.
My final gripe with this book is it's title, emphasis on 'Aftermath' , the synopsis even proclaims that the story concerns the aftermath. IT DOES NOT! It is a story thet takes you from an accident at 11.30am, which causes the whole sorry process, to a couple hiding in a freezer just 6 hours later! The only aftermath is a one page epilogue dated 3 days later.
I sure hope that he does not write a sequel.
If you really love zombies, and just have to see for yourself, then buy the book (as cheaply as possible), but do not expect much.