As usual, Virgina Henley knows how to write hot historical romance (which is why I read her books). If I want to labor over archaic english, I'll read Shakespeare (which I have; I doubt any of those who complained that the language in this book is not archaic enough, haven't). Her characters speak with enough formality and "old" terms -- their words certainly aren't modern (which is extremely annoying) like some authors I have read. Virginia Henley's books are well researched, her characters well fleshed out and likable and her love scenes light up the pages. Another winner -- read it, you'll love it.